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malibu · 08-15-2003, 03:08 AM

Alright I wrote a poem awhile back during the school year and I just wanted to get people's opinions on it...

Arbeit Macht Frei
I'm walking into Auschwitz, I'm standing at the gate,
I feel completely vulernable to become a victim of hate,
I know there's no escaping, at least not with my life,
I don't know how to handle this unrelenting strife,
I read the gate above me, it says "Arbeit Macht Frei,"
Work may make me free, but I still believe I'll die,
My stay will not be easy, I know this much is true,
I will do my best to live and that's all that I can do,
I don't know what is happening, I've been sorted to the right,
We're going into a building, my heart is pounding in fright,
And now the doors are closing, I think they're locking us in,
The gas is closing around me, the air is growing thin,
Death of suffocation, I know that I am doomed,
My fate to fail selection and end up in this room,
But wait the door is opening, but will it be too late,
I can not really tell you, I've died and that's my fate.

[ August 15, 2003, 01:08 AM: Message edited by: malibu ]

Fruitacious B · 08-15-2003, 03:39 AM

That's a good poem, it relates so well to what the holocaust was like. Me gusta.

StabMaster Arson · 08-15-2003, 04:08 AM

Fruity, how the fuck do you know what the "holocaust" was like. I can't believe that there are still people that actually think that any of this actually took place... I thought it was common knowledge that the holocaust is a myth, like the boogieman, that shylocks made up to get ahead in the white man's world. Goddamn kike bastards got everyone upset over nothing more than one of their own cemetaries that they claim used to be a "concentration camp". Fuck all the Jesus-killers.
-strictly tongue in cheek... I did enjoy the poem

[ August 15, 2003, 02:09 AM: Message edited by: StabMaster Arson ]

the_butcher · 08-15-2003, 04:35 AM

Now why exactly did you have to write a poem about the Holocaust in school? Seems like a strange thing to write a poem about, but oh well. Interesting to say the least.

Schroeder · 08-15-2003, 09:43 PM

Sorry, Malibu. AA BB CC DD poem structure isn't real impressive. I kind of liked it anyway.

Titan · 08-15-2003, 09:52 PM

Schroeder, enlighten me. I must have missed where you placed your AB BA CC DA EF GJ IK RR SM BF BS KKK TRL BBC FU poem. I'm sure that it's leagues beyond malibu's in value, so go ahead and point it out to me, I'd love to read it.

silver and cold · 08-16-2003, 01:51 AM

Poetry is poetry, whether it seems like it or not...read Edger Allan Poe, some of doesnt even sound like a poem. Thats my friends, is poetry.

Malibu, its cool..
*rembering the times we used to write songs and shit(rolls eyes and laughs)*

Schroeder · 08-16-2003, 02:08 AM

Originally posted by malibu:
Alright I wrote a poem awhile back during the school year and I just wanted to get people's opinions on it...

Titan, she wanted an opinion. I gave an opinion. I clearly didn't say I could write something better.

[ August 16, 2003, 12:10 AM: Message edited by: Schroeder ]

Titan · 08-16-2003, 04:27 AM

Shroeder, I clearly didn't say you did.

*coughcoughquotebuttoncough*

*coughnotthathardtofindcoughcough*

fat_retard · 08-16-2003, 03:14 PM

Heres a poem about the holocaust that I stumbled across.

I was at the 7-11.
I ate a burrito.
I drank a Slurpee.
I was tired.
It was late, after work washing dishes.
The burrito was good.
I had another.

I did it every day for a week.
I did it every day for a month.

To cook a burrito you tear off the plastic wrapper.
You push button #3 on the microwave.
Burritos are large, small, or medium.
Red or green chili peppers.
Beef or bean or both.
There are 7-11's all across the nation.

On the way out I bought a quart of beer for $1.39.
I was aware of social injustice
In only the vaguest possible way.

malibu · 08-18-2003, 06:59 PM

nice poem fat_retard... definitely shoots mine right out of the water.

fat_retard · 08-19-2003, 08:18 AM

Thanks but I didn't write it, I found it at http://www.fish.com/

EleanorJones · 08-22-2003, 07:11 PM

i know that i am a little behind on this post.. but stab.. you TRULY think that the holocaust did not happen?? wow.. just wow.. well i wasn't there i didn't feel the pain but i am pretty sure that it did in fact happen.. i recenlt visited my great grandfather who was i world war 2 you know that one about the holocaust? well he happened to have a camera when his platoon liberated one of the camps.. i saw the pictures.. they were real.. dead bodies in trenches and in the crematories.. i really don't think they had the technology or equipment to make up such pictures or to make people look like they hadn't eaten in 5 months. i am not trying to be rude,, but if you really don't think that there was a holocaust well then wow

Ugly Bastard · 08-22-2003, 07:22 PM

Elanor, I noticed you're a lesbian. How's that working out for ya?

-Ugly Bastard

Titan · 08-22-2003, 09:35 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by StabMaster Arson:
strictly tongue in cheek

Fruitacious B · 08-23-2003, 02:53 AM

I hope she quits while she's still in single digits, I don't know how long I'll be able to stand this one.

But seriously, Eleanor, it's been proven that the holocaust didn't really happen. It was all German Propaganda made to piss off the other countries. If you don't believe me go here.

Combat Chuck · 08-23-2003, 03:26 AM

Yeah, seriously, the German propagandians were so fucking ingenious. To actually make countries believe that they were offing hundreds of thousands of Jews by setting up fake concentration camps and getting fake Jews and not really killing them....fucking amazing. I swear, they probably helped us with our space race sham as well.

If only Rammstein were a ploy too.

EleanorJones · 08-23-2003, 04:08 PM

i see well obviously that shows my ignorance. i apologize but it seemed like the pictures were so real.. i guess the Germans were geniouses.. again i apologize for my stupidity

and Ugly Bastard.. i am not truly a lesbian but if i was i'm sure it would be goin great

Titan · 08-23-2003, 08:09 PM

Not only were the Germans geniouses, but they were also geenioosies and gineousses.

getupkids · 08-25-2003, 09:25 PM

hahahaha...
Eleanor, well her posts just make me giggle.

Quote:

Originally posted by EleanorJones:
and Ugly Bastard.. i am not truly a lesbian but if i was i'm sure it would be goin great

Hmmm.. a little confident in our lesbian love life are we?
Oh, and by the way.. thanks for attempting to make sense in the pm that you sent me. It almost offended me [img]smile.gif[/img]

08-15-2003, 03:08 AM	#1 (permalink)
malibu Caribou Lou Join Date: May 2003 Location: Warsaw, IN, Usa Posts: 948 Internets: 567	Alright I wrote a poem awhile back during the school year and I just wanted to get people's opinions on it... Arbeit Macht Frei I'm walking into Auschwitz, I'm standing at the gate, I feel completely vulernable to become a victim of hate, I know there's no escaping, at least not with my life, I don't know how to handle this unrelenting strife, I read the gate above me, it says "Arbeit Macht Frei," Work may make me free, but I still believe I'll die, My stay will not be easy, I know this much is true, I will do my best to live and that's all that I can do, I don't know what is happening, I've been sorted to the right, We're going into a building, my heart is pounding in fright, And now the doors are closing, I think they're locking us in, The gas is closing around me, the air is growing thin, Death of suffocation, I know that I am doomed, My fate to fail selection and end up in this room, But wait the door is opening, but will it be too late, I can not really tell you, I've died and that's my fate. [ August 15, 2003, 01:08 AM: Message edited by: malibu ]
	"Remember, what happens in Vegas stays in Vegas. Except for herpes. That shit'll come back with you."

08-15-2003, 03:39 AM	#2 (permalink)
Fruitacious B Bokononist Join Date: May 2003 Location: Indianapolis Posts: 2,595 Internets: 11801	That's a good poem, it relates so well to what the holocaust was like. Me gusta.
	"Those who believe in telekinetics, raise my hand." \|vonnegut

08-15-2003, 04:08 AM	#3 (permalink)
StabMaster Arson Roscoe P. Coldchain Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Stabbin Cabin Posts: 2,759 Internets: 1425	Fruity, how the fuck do you know what the "holocaust" was like. I can't believe that there are still people that actually think that any of this actually took place... I thought it was common knowledge that the holocaust is a myth, like the boogieman, that shylocks made up to get ahead in the white man's world. Goddamn kike bastards got everyone upset over nothing more than one of their own cemetaries that they claim used to be a "concentration camp". Fuck all the Jesus-killers. -strictly tongue in cheek... I did enjoy the poem [ August 15, 2003, 02:09 AM: Message edited by: StabMaster Arson ]
	LEGALIZE CRIME!

08-15-2003, 04:35 AM	#4 (permalink)
the_butcher Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: ::: the recesses of my mind ::: Posts: 1,023 Internets: 10	Now why exactly did you have to write a poem about the Holocaust in school? Seems like a strange thing to write a poem about, but oh well. Interesting to say the least.
	\| bite the bullet and swallow lead \|

08-15-2003, 09:52 PM	#6 (permalink)
Titan Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2002 Posts: 3,698 Internets: 10	Schroeder, enlighten me. I must have missed where you placed your AB BA CC DA EF GJ IK RR SM BF BS KKK TRL BBC FU poem. I'm sure that it's leagues beyond malibu's in value, so go ahead and point it out to me, I'd love to read it.
	I do what the fuck I want.

08-15-2003, 09:43 PM	#5 (permalink)
Schroeder Unwanted Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 1,543 Internets: -885	Sorry, Malibu. AA BB CC DD poem structure isn't real impressive. I kind of liked it anyway.

08-16-2003, 01:51 AM	#7 (permalink)
silver and cold Ish... Join Date: May 2003 Location: this nowhere Posts: 1,680 Internets: 10	Poetry is poetry, whether it seems like it or not...read Edger Allan Poe, some of doesnt even sound like a poem. Thats my friends, is poetry. Malibu, its cool.. rembering the times we used to write songs and shit(rolls eyes and laughs)
	the killer in me is the killer in you.

08-16-2003, 02:08 AM	#8 (permalink)
Schroeder Unwanted Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 1,543 Internets: -885	Originally posted by malibu: Alright I wrote a poem awhile back during the school year and I just wanted to get people's opinions on it... Titan, she wanted an opinion. I gave an opinion. I clearly didn't say I could write something better. [ August 16, 2003, 12:10 AM: Message edited by: Schroeder ]

08-16-2003, 04:27 AM	#9 (permalink)
Titan Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2002 Posts: 3,698 Internets: 10	Shroeder, I clearly didn't say you did. coughcoughquotebuttoncough coughnotthathardtofindcoughcough
	I do what the fuck I want.

08-16-2003, 03:14 PM	#10 (permalink)
fat_retard Senior Member Join Date: May 2003 Location: a house Posts: 664 Internets: 10	Heres a poem about the holocaust that I stumbled across. I was at the 7-11. I ate a burrito. I drank a Slurpee. I was tired. It was late, after work washing dishes. The burrito was good. I had another. I did it every day for a week. I did it every day for a month. To cook a burrito you tear off the plastic wrapper. You push button #3 on the microwave. Burritos are large, small, or medium. Red or green chili peppers. Beef or bean or both. There are 7-11's all across the nation. On the way out I bought a quart of beer for $1.39. I was aware of social injustice In only the vaguest possible way.

08-18-2003, 06:59 PM	#11 (permalink)
malibu Caribou Lou Join Date: May 2003 Location: Warsaw, IN, Usa Posts: 948 Internets: 567	nice poem fat_retard... definitely shoots mine right out of the water.
	"Remember, what happens in Vegas stays in Vegas. Except for herpes. That shit'll come back with you."

08-19-2003, 08:18 AM	#12 (permalink)
fat_retard Senior Member Join Date: May 2003 Location: a house Posts: 664 Internets: 10	Thanks but I didn't write it, I found it at http://www.fish.com/

08-22-2003, 07:11 PM	#13 (permalink)
EleanorJones Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Warsaw, In Posts: 6 Internets: 10	i know that i am a little behind on this post.. but stab.. you TRULY think that the holocaust did not happen?? wow.. just wow.. well i wasn't there i didn't feel the pain but i am pretty sure that it did in fact happen.. i recenlt visited my great grandfather who was i world war 2 you know that one about the holocaust? well he happened to have a camera when his platoon liberated one of the camps.. i saw the pictures.. they were real.. dead bodies in trenches and in the crematories.. i really don't think they had the technology or equipment to make up such pictures or to make people look like they hadn't eaten in 5 months. i am not trying to be rude,, but if you really don't think that there was a holocaust well then wow
	Choking on the thought of leaving. Drinking to keep from heaving. 5pm 5 dollar pints. Hellbound airline time and price.

08-22-2003, 07:22 PM	#14 (permalink)
Ugly Bastard Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: U.S.A. Posts: 13,643 Internets: 247330	Elanor, I noticed you're a lesbian. How's that working out for ya? -Ugly Bastard

08-23-2003, 02:53 AM	#16 (permalink)
Fruitacious B Bokononist Join Date: May 2003 Location: Indianapolis Posts: 2,595 Internets: 11801	I hope she quits while she's still in single digits, I don't know how long I'll be able to stand this one. But seriously, Eleanor, it's been proven that the holocaust didn't really happen. It was all German Propaganda made to piss off the other countries. If you don't believe me go here.
	"Those who believe in telekinetics, raise my hand." \|vonnegut

08-23-2003, 03:26 AM	#17 (permalink)
Combat Chuck Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 2,063 Internets: 10	Yeah, seriously, the German propagandians were so fucking ingenious. To actually make countries believe that they were offing hundreds of thousands of Jews by setting up fake concentration camps and getting fake Jews and not really killing them....fucking amazing. I swear, they probably helped us with our space race sham as well. If only Rammstein were a ploy too.

08-23-2003, 04:08 PM	#18 (permalink)
EleanorJones Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Warsaw, In Posts: 6 Internets: 10	i see well obviously that shows my ignorance. i apologize but it seemed like the pictures were so real.. i guess the Germans were geniouses.. again i apologize for my stupidity and Ugly Bastard.. i am not truly a lesbian but if i was i'm sure it would be goin great
	Choking on the thought of leaving. Drinking to keep from heaving. 5pm 5 dollar pints. Hellbound airline time and price.

08-23-2003, 08:09 PM	#19 (permalink)
Titan Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2002 Posts: 3,698 Internets: 10	Not only were the Germans geniouses, but they were also geenioosies and gineousses.
	I do what the fuck I want.

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