The bass/cello line at the beginning works well. The picking is decent. I'm not so much a fan of the opening melody line by the clarinet. It gets better when the strings come in. At this point I assume you're doing this all on a Triton or something of the sort.
As the second part begins, some of the runs are ok, though the sounds used are subpar. The part before the finish is ok.
Really not that bad at all. I almost think it would sound better just using a couple instraments though, as opposed to the range of noises you use.
Not bad, I look forward to hearing it when it is complete.
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