Schroeder:
When I made that statement, I meant it as a general statement, not an unbreakable rule, I apologize if that wasn't clear enough for you.
It's true though. On the whole, high school kids can not write well. Ask any educator about it, and I can assure you that he/she will tell you the same thing. That doesn't mean there is not talent out there (which usually has it's own means of revealing itself)...
Look:
I did not like your story.
I did not like the plot.
I did not like the characters.
I did not like your style.
You asked for comments, I gave you my opinion, even gave some justification for it (in badass poetic style too...).
It's a good thing you chose not to explore writing, because anybody who gets as insanely defensive as you wouldn't survive long.
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