Alright, this story blows dick. But rather than be discouraged, let's use this one as an example of how not to make a story.
Let's try again, this time, with a few small rules:
1.) This is not a pornographic story, so enough of the sexually-driven words.
2.) Let's actually try to make it a story that you could read in Reader's Digest or some shit like that someday. A completely decent, publishable story.
Shall we try again....
Dylan
-Ugly Bastard
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