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Repugnant Abomination · 02-12-2007, 12:39 AM

lol, k thanks.

Most of the feedback I've gotten so far is that I need to slow down, that the scenes are too rushed. It's a valid complaint, but the problem is I'm working with a 3000 word limit. It's a work in progress.

02-12-2007, 12:39 AM	#4 (permalink)
Repugnant Abomination Almost there... Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 5,979 Internets: 164547	lol, k thanks. Most of the feedback I've gotten so far is that I need to slow down, that the scenes are too rushed. It's a valid complaint, but the problem is I'm working with a 3000 word limit. It's a work in progress.